Approaches to Writing - Phase 7 Assignment 7B:
Research Paper: Final Version
Assignment 7B - Paper: Second Version
Scoring Criteria
(120 possible mileage points)
  1. Submission is titled correctly [For correct title, see "Assignment 7B" instructions under "How do I submit this assignment?"] (5 mileage points):

  2. Paper correctly uses MLA paper format (5 mileage points):

  3. Paper contains a HIGHLY COMPELLING introduction (and a clear argumentative thesis statement) (10 mileage points):

  4. Paper contains a background section and/or other background information where needed (10 points):

  5. Thesis is developed by at least three main points that mark three distinct sections of the paper (10 mileage points):

  6. Each main point is FULLY AND CONVINCINGLY supported by subpoints, evidence, and/or logical explanations than in the Paper: Second Version (30 mileage points total):

    Main Point # 1 (10 mileage points):

    Main Point # 2 (10 mileage points):

    Main Point # 3 (10 mileage points):

  7. Paper contains a HIGHLY COMPELLING conclusion than in the Paper: Second Version (10 mileage points):

  8. Evidence comes from a variety of credible sources (5 mileage points):

  9. Paper includes a Works Cited page in proper MLA format; also, all information borrowed from sources are marked by parenthetical references [in proper MLA format] that correspond with entries on the Works Cited page] (10 points):

  10. Editing concerns have been addressed in the writing (25 points total):

    a. sentences are structured as complete thoughts (no comma splices, fused sentences, sentence fragments, etc.)

    b. sentences contain few grammatical errors

    c. sentences contain few mechanical errors (errors in punctuation, spelling, italics, capitalization, etc.)

    d. sentences are not repetitious or wordy

    e. sentences employ effective diction

    f. sentences convey a clear tone and strong voice

    g. parenthetical references and Works Cited page entries are correctly punctuated and capitalized, per MLA format

    h. parenthetical references and Works Cited page entries contain accurate and complete information, per MLA format

TOTAL MILEAGE POINTS FOR ASSIGNMENT 7B (OUT OF 120 POSSIBLE):

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Where do I go next?
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